She was sleeping on the moon.
I was living on the sun.
The stars all gathered around her smile.
Then one night she was gone.
And though I tried to call her name
The night quickly turned to dawn.
Lonely moon shine your light
I beg you please come out tonight.
Show the world your precious smile
My whole life has become fragile.
I saw a tear roll down her eye
Take my hand and don't you cry.
You're not alone I'm always here
I'll stand beside you 'till I die.
And as I held her in my arms
She turned away and said goodbye.
Lonely moon shine your light.
I beg you please come out tonight.
Show the world your precious smile.
My whole life has become fragile.
Love it though if I may critique your ending I felt like it was missing something. "my whole life has become fragile" seems to leave me hanging. Other than that I love it though.
ReplyDeleteOk well I'm glad u like it. Im actually still wrking on it tho. :)
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